Hello I bellieve my article is well sourced and the style is similar to other submissions. Are there any suggestions you can make? How can I publish it given im new to wiki.
Thanks
Just need an help to improve the page and avoid deletion.
Consider that company mentioned has a sound story, and is well known in the market worldwide so a lot of information can be added. I added a short description because I was trying to be as neutral as possible. Thanks in advance.
At the moment it doesn't have much to go on, more a definition than anything. Personally, I would think it better to add that info into the existing Page view article, which is need of expansion and is related.
It needs references to support it, as it is not cited.
Please review the "Demand Sensing" article I've drafted for feedback. Many thanks.
Summary:
Demand Sensing is a next generation forecasting method that leverages new mathematical techniques and near real-time information to create an accurate forecast of demand, based on the current realities of the supply chain. The typical performance of demand sensing systems reduces near-term forecast error by 30% or more compared to traditional time-series forecasting techniques. The jump in forecast accuracy helps companies manage the effects of market volatility and gain the benefits of a demand-driven supply chain, including more efficient operations, increased service levels, and a range of financial benefits including higher revenue, better profit margins, less inventory, better perfect order performance and a shorter cash-to-cash cycle time. Gartner, Inc. insight on demand sensing can be found in its report, "Supply Chain Strategy for Manufacturing Leaders: The Handbook for Becoming Demand Driven."
Ronald Simien is a philosophic poet that stepped away from the book publishing world while his potential was still rising and creating adoration in the arts and poetry community. Seeking to set a new standard for the literary art of creative writing, Ronald turned away from the contentment of book deals to explore the pure relationship of readers that are moved and feel connected to the power of written words in the process of branding his literature.
This is a new article I've been writing as part of my UGRS scholarship at Leeds University. I'd very much like any feedback and comments you have to make it better (and hopefully to get the little blue box at the top removed!)
I note you have been working on this since February, and that most of your edits on wiki have been dedicated to its development, with a few exceptions. Because only a handful of your contribs are in articles, I'm going to assume that you are not familiar with all Wikis quality standard guidelines, just yet and have copy-edited the article, given that it isn't too long. You can review those copy-edits here if you want to see those changes in detail.
As this is a historical article, in addition to references it needs citing. At present there are no in-line references to support quotes, facts or figures which could be challenged; before you publish it to article space it is vital that you do so to avoid deletion. A guide to citing can be found here: WP:CITE; it is a relatively straight-forward process once you get used to it. What you strongly need to account for from your references when citing is the notability of the subject. And all citations should be verifiable.
As your book materials are all listed, I would recommend a short-form of citing, which make things a lot easier for you. Simply go through the article, and when you cite a sentence or key-point, simply type in the author's surname and the relevant page/s like so: <ref>Tibbets, p. 10.</ref> or <ref>Paley, pp. 21–25.</ref> for example - the results of which will automatically appear in the References section, in order and formatted.
Feel free to ask any questions or request a follow-up review via my talk page.
The page is brand new. I know for a fact that other editors have tried to make this article, but information on his biography was not centralized anywhere. I still don't know his DOB or exactly what years he was in the army, what he did in the army, and how he worked at different positions chronologically. There is also a hole of info from Multimedia Entertainment, which lists him as Prez from 1991-1994, and Conevry after him, but who was before Turner? And if anyone has a pic, please, please add🙂
Could this page es content and structure be better? It is a new page but this individual is connected to the various Wikipedia pages outlined and has notability in their own right.
Regarding your comment above - wiki articles do not inherit notability from other wiki articles, but must account for notability in their own right.
That said, you do appear to have accounted for Pakula - a few of your sources are independent which is required, although several are self-published by Pakula himself.
I would strongly advise that you apply all your web references within the {{cite web}} template to prevent link rot, as bare urls are generally discouraged.
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